One Night in Xag: Part Two
Chapter: Season Six
Breaking into the temple of Deknar the Smith in the first session? Easy!
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Breaking into the temple of Deknar the Smith in the first session? Easy!
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With the apostrophe, I know that the character is speaking with an accent, and so the spelling may have something to do with that. However, I feel that I would be remiss in my duties as Unofficial (and Unasked For) Grammar and Spelling Nitpicker if I didn’t point out that “brethren” is actually spelled with an “e”, not an “o”.
I’m sure that all involved will be extremely grateful for (and not the least bit annoyed by) this wholly unsolicited advice. You’re welcome. 😉
And now as I reread the comic, I realize that was not what was intended at all, that the apostrophe was actually a shortening of “brother and”, so I now submit this correction to my previous correction.
You’re welcome again.
Some days, it’s just so fulfilling to be an Unofficial (and Unasked For) Grammar and Spelling Nitpicker. I love my job; if only I could get someone to actually pay me for it. I can’t for the life of me figure out why I haven’t gotten any offers yet…
I bet your fun at parties.
I see what you did there.
You’re* 🙂
You CAN get paid for that, blackbird! Become an editor!
I know what its supposed to be.
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It’s.
Oh man. I cant help but tortcher people like that.
Oh man. Like tortchering her would literally be hilarious and awesome. Or you could jsut flip him teh Bird. that would be totally Ironic.
(heh…vein in neck pulsating, forehead a deep purple, foam flecks in the corner of her mouth…)
Haha! you Typod!! LEarn who too sPILL!
That’s quite a title. You should abbreviate it…
UaUFGaSN (pronounced oo-a-f’gassin)
Where’s my headsman’s axe and the chopping block I’m in a mood to behead me a grammar nazi, someone grab the ropes to tie em down with, ARRRRRRRRRRR.
You forgot the period after ‘block’. Also, that comma after ‘nazi’ should probably have been a period as well, the sentence doesn’t flow that well as it is now. Lastly, in ‘tie em down’ em should have had an apostrophe in front to indicate the missing ‘th’. You’re welcome.
“My Brother’n I” = “My Brother And I” as seen two lines below
“Your Knowledge’n Considerable Talents”=”Your Knowledge And Considerable Talents”
But that’s just my opinion…
Someone call the tailor, we are going to need to let out this guy’s pants to make room for his enormous balls.
Matt, you’re assuming he ever gets invited to them.
Loving this.
It was definitely worth the effort
Calvis certainly has some large balls. In fact, you could say he’s got…
*piano riff*
great balls of fire!
…I’ll go away now.
“We’ll he’s got big balls and she’s got big balls… “
Let me guess Geo. You’ve got the Biggest Balls of them all??
So if a priest of one god robs a temple of a different god, would that be considered sacrilege or just a dick move?
Turf war?
I believe it could called a belonging to a prestige class. Like the Temple Raider of Olidammara.
When you’re a priest of the god of thieves i think its part of the job description
I love the British accents. Great acting, none of the actors are actually British. Little known fact the actor playing Brett’s character is actually born in Melbourne Australia
steal an artifact from one o the few Karthun deities that isn’t evil, dead, or insane… YEA you’d pretty much have to be #3 to think you wouldn’t end up #2
Yes but deknar is minding the chain that keeps the world fire at bay so he’s a little bit busy and not paying attention to his faith
I love the cloaked guy chillin’ at the table, kinda like the elephant in the room…
You guys notice how you can kinda tell who’s character belongs to who by their face? 😀
That’s really damn cool